I think the "squeezed" top one works a lot better now and is more legible, yet still has the weird folds. I also like the experimentation of Drip- you really see the action and movement that was stressed into the paper.
Both of these designs have come a long way. "Squeezed" is now obvious in each separate letter and also as a word. It looks much better than with the excess space between each letter that we saw previously.
Drip has more character than before. However, I think the shapes of letters need to interact more with the "drips." Possibly you could start to blur some of the edges of the letters (water?) so that they weren't in such high contrast.
I really really like Drip. You can definitely tell it's still Helvetica, but it's distorted and changed just enough to draw the viewer's eye in. It's also interesting, because each letter has the ability to have a completely different effect.
I think the "squeezed" top one works a lot better now and is more legible, yet still has the weird folds. I also like the experimentation of Drip- you really see the action and movement that was stressed into the paper.
ReplyDeleteBoth of these designs have come a long way. "Squeezed" is now obvious in each separate letter and also as a word. It looks much better than with the excess space between each letter that we saw previously.
ReplyDeleteDrip has more character than before. However, I think the shapes of letters need to interact more with the "drips." Possibly you could start to blur some of the edges of the letters (water?) so that they weren't in such high contrast.
I really really like Drip. You can definitely tell it's still Helvetica, but it's distorted and changed just enough to draw the viewer's eye in. It's also interesting, because each letter has the ability to have a completely different effect.
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