Friday, September 30, 2011

another revision

1 comment:

  1. it might be interesting to play around with the colors of the text. Maybe incorporate the background purples or blues. Some of the text is a little hard to follow, but it is manageable. The small line of text that stretches out over the "you" in are you game? gets a little lost in the background, maybe try changing that text to a purple or blue? just suggestions :)

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