I really like all three of these, and I especially like the last one because it makes me wonder why toothpaste and a guy at walmart have to do with a missed connection. If I were to say one thing, I would just say try playing around with the body type, instead of centering it, try staggering it, or left justifying it, or just toy around with it, engage it with the image. I also like how your grungy typeface adds to the incredibly creepy quality that goes along with missed connections. Like a dirty little secret or something.
I really like all three of these, and I especially like the last one because it makes me wonder why toothpaste and a guy at walmart have to do with a missed connection. If I were to say one thing, I would just say try playing around with the body type, instead of centering it, try staggering it, or left justifying it, or just toy around with it, engage it with the image.
ReplyDeleteI also like how your grungy typeface adds to the incredibly creepy quality that goes along with missed connections. Like a dirty little secret or something.