I think the most successful of your three is the bottom Twitter one. The concept is awesome and I love your font because it backs up what your concept is. I'm just a little confused about the text in the background. I'm not really sure how to fix it, other than changing it altogether? I'm also confused as to what the title is, or what the eye should look at first... so hierarchy. Maybe it's just a change in opacity or color?
I think the most successful of your three is the bottom Twitter one. The concept is awesome and I love your font because it backs up what your concept is. I'm just a little confused about the text in the background. I'm not really sure how to fix it, other than changing it altogether? I'm also confused as to what the title is, or what the eye should look at first... so hierarchy. Maybe it's just a change in opacity or color?
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