I really like your revisions. I think the "Focus" is the most successful. I really like out of focus alphabet, one suggestion is keep all the letters layered like that but change density. Some letters can be as dense as G and some translucent like Q. I liked the first version of "Spike" you had in class more than this revision.
I really like your revisions. I think the "Focus" is the most successful. I really like out of focus alphabet, one suggestion is keep all the letters layered like that but change density. Some letters can be as dense as G and some translucent like Q.
ReplyDeleteI liked the first version of "Spike" you had in class more than this revision.