I think the first one works better than the last one. I like the way that you reversed the idea of the eye chart, making it more out of focus at the top. I think it plays really well with the idea of not being able to concentrate, and becoming more focused as your work your way towards coffee. Really clever.
I feel like the rest of the page is a little empty, which makes sense since it's an eye chart poster, but I can't help but wonder what you could do with the edges. Maybe a coffee stain running down the side? Not sure, just seems a little too empty on the edges!
I think the first one works better than the last one. I like the way that you reversed the idea of the eye chart, making it more out of focus at the top. I think it plays really well with the idea of not being able to concentrate, and becoming more focused as your work your way towards coffee. Really clever.
ReplyDeleteI feel like the rest of the page is a little empty, which makes sense since it's an eye chart poster, but I can't help but wonder what you could do with the edges. Maybe a coffee stain running down the side? Not sure, just seems a little too empty on the edges!