Tuesday, November 8, 2011

hmmmmm



So here is some further exploration. Trying to combine both of my sketches into one cohesive composition. Im still not happy with it. Help?

1 comment:

  1. This looks a lot better than your previous ones, but there's still too much going on! I enjoy how some of the text/numbers go off of the page, but I would shrink it all down a bit, leave some whites space and let it breath. Overall it's lookin good =)

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